新课标中有关写作的评价标准强调了语言表达的能力：语言结构要丰富、多变，简约与复杂并存。因此，在确保行文准确、流畅的前提下，学生在写作时需要灵活多变地运用语句。适当运用复合句会使文章的语言结构更加丰富多彩。
一、学生写作中常见的复合句使用错误
1.只有从句，没有主句。
例如：Li Ming who studies hard at school,so he can make great progress.
2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子。
例如：The hall is different fromall other buildings, it is made of glass.
3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然。
例如：There are over fifty studentsin this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
试比较: Overfifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet nextSunday.
4.过多地使用并列句组合信息。
例如：It is a beautiful day, andthe sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.
试比较：It is a beautiful day withthe sun shining and a breeze blowing.
二、如何用一句复合句合并几个简单句如要将句子“不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。”合并成一个复合句，可以采用下列步骤：
第一步：
拆分成几个简单句。上句可拆分成三个简单句：①不是人人都能学好英语。②小学生同时学汉语和英语。③这会影响汉语学习。
第二步：
分别翻译拆分后的简单句。
翻译步骤一中拆分出的三个简单句：
①Not everyone is good atlearning English.② Children from primary schoollearn English and Chinese at the same time. ③This willaffect their Chinese study.
第三步：
合并句子。合并步骤二中的三个简单句：Thatchildren from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the sametime will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learningEnglish. 或If children from primaryschool start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect theirChinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.
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